Friday 26 October 2018

Show Not Tell





The Sea.
The sun shines down on the sparkling blue water. The warm water attracts fish. Birds fly around and cry through the silence of the morning sky. Small waves rest upon the sandy shore. Sunblock sticks tight to my skin as I jump into the water. I swim down deep and pressure hurts my head. I look around, the reef is full of colour. I don’t have enough air so I head to the surface. I break the surface and feel the heat of the air.Image result for blue water

We are learning to write to show pictures in people's heads.